His African Sweetheart – Part 12

Author’s Note:

Part 12 started out is a little over 4000 words and then I did corrections through Grammarly.  The word count dropped to near 3400.

Lesson on writing from this chapter: I’m still a bit wordy. Although I still ignored several passive sentence structures so sue me. There is possible one or two dangling modifiers as well.

Performance

This text scores better than 99% of all text checked by Grammarly where comparable goals were set.

 

Word Count

Characters 18,146
Words 3,359
Sentences 233
Reading time 13 min 26 sec
Speaking time 25 min 50 sec

Readability

Metrics compared to other Grammarly users

Word length 4.2
Sentence length 14.4
Readability score 80
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His African Sweetheart

Part 12

By Sylvia Hubbard

Part 12

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9 thoughts on “His African Sweetheart – Part 12

  1. Whew chile! So we steadily making babies. He just unloaded a ton of chiren amd neither of them batted an eyelash. I knew he was in love but what happens next will really cause some hurt. He ain’t ready. She ain’t ready. I don’t think anybody is ready besides Shadow. She always ready and plans ahead. Great update.

  2. I want to be in Shadow’s head to know what her plans are. Is Enola on birth control? She claim to want to be rid of Aeden, but she is risking another pregnancy. After he poured his heart out what he going to do about the other woman. Is Enola ready for the repercussions when she disappears? I’m afraid he will turn into a more evil person then before.

    1. Sigh…. This chapter really hit home for me because Enola really plans on leaving. I mean I can’t convince her otherwise and I know that sounds crazy and wild, but she has to go back to Canada. She can’t stay there.

  3. Aedan and Enola’s relatiionship is so intense. He said he would do anything for her. If she can remember that after their mind blowing sexual encounter, she needs to ask for something that will keep her and her little girl safe. Something that will give her some leverage. If Aedan ever finds out about the other child I can’t imagine how evil and angry he will become because she would have out smarted him all this time. I’m sure Shadow has this all figured out. Can’t wait to see.

  4. Whew chile, Enola needs to get away for real or she won’t be able to leave him and if he finds out about the baby girl it’s a wrap, or maybe not? hmmm, he needs something that will push him over the edge to make the right move for a change. The girl he going to marry is insane also, and if she finds out about Enola that could be a problem also. I do believe the Shadow will come to the rescue but it’s going to be close, and what is Najii up too, I do not believe she changed her ways all that much, probably waiting patiently for a time to show up and show out and get her life how she wants it…..that’s all I got 🙂

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