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About the book:

Derek seeks revenge on ex-friend Maddox Ryan for a deadly fire he thinks killed his fiance, Adira. He sabotages Maddox Ryan’s philanthropy firm but discovers his former friend’s innocence. As the sabotage continues, everyone outside of their throuple becomes prime suspects. It is a tale of betrayal, revenge, and the complex bonds of friendship with second chances.

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Chapter update: 11/19/2023

What happened in this chapter:

Getting a chance to speak with her son, Adira felt the guilt of her choices and knew she was paying for them tenfold. Fear of Derek ever finding out she was alive troubled her deeply because she knew the hurt would be more from him. This chapter/episode further reaffirms Adira didn’t need or want Derek in her life. As for Maddox, manipulating Derek and Adira without either of them knowing was taking a toll on his nerves 

AUTHOR’S NOTE:

The timing of this chapter was a little distorted, and I kept changing where everything was until I was like, leave it. My readers are smart enough to figure out the timeline independently. Stop helping. So I’m hoping you did and it wasn’t confusing. Do you? Let me know in the comments. As for this chapter, it was to solidify in Adira’s head there was no way Derek would yearn to be with her, and deep down inside, she had not forgotten what he could do to her. And it wasn’t just sexual, but she didn’t want to let Maddox know Derek was and will always be the better man for both of them. What are your thoughts? Will tonight really work out the way Maddox plans it to? Will Derek suspect it’s Adira? Will Adira know it’s Derek? 

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Don’t forget to lmk: Are you #TeamDerek or #TeamMaddox?

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Writer’s Notes: – word count –72,368


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COMPANIONSHIP AND SERIALS… RELATED TO THIS STORY

And while you’re on Amazon, get the companionship book to Desire’s Tryst, which is Delilah’s Desire and Eve’s Deception

Other companionship books

His Substitute Wife… Her Sister – Nevada (she appears in others, but this is where she starts)

She Works Hard For The Money

Tanner’s Devil

Continue following this post or read other updated posts to see this companionship books list grow (or read ALL my books so you’re already familiar with them when they pop in.)

Answers to Frequent Questions

I’m working in LivingWriter.com on the story. I’m trying to move away from Google docs.

I like adding my author’s notes (keep track of what I say and offer more words without worrying about a word count like when I type it fresh in the Kindle Vella platform.

I’m also using storyoriginapp.com to keep up with my word count and offer beta copies behind a paywall for my premium and alpha readers. This is fun and exciting. Maybe I’ll offer it over on my site in a full book later. We’ll see how the turnout comes.

I’m using my blog to track my writer’s thoughts. I can’t share the deep ones in the Author’s Notes; only real writers can understand.

So I did use ChatGPT to help me outline after giving it a detailed synopsis (about a page long), but I’m finding myself moving a lot of things around at least having an outline to remember a lot of the things I’d have to come back and add.

It’s my first time using ChatGPT on a live book, and I hope this will help this paper write a lot faster so I can give my readers the chapters.

Moving things around meaning, a lot of the things ChatGPT told me to write in Chapters 3 and 4 I managed to manipulate in Chapter 1, and then in Chapter 4, I’m pulling from Chapters 5 and six, so I’m a little ahead of the game, but I’m still following The Save the Cat method in my telling of the story.

Having the outline makes me write more because I know where I’m going, and I can map out in my head better how to get to scenes faster and not be so wordy.

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My editing process.”

I use Grammarly, which works well in Livingwriter and then I’ll post it in my Kindle Vella, check the grammar some more, read it out loud, and then if I’m satisfied, I’ll post it.

Got questions? Ask away in the comments. I’m eager to share my journey and work out any confusion.

Don’t forget the companionship stories are Eve’s Deception (AVAILABLE FOR PRE-ORDER ON AMAZON) and Delilah’s Desire (IN THE KINDLE VELLA LIBRARY) / While you’re waiting for the next episodes, grab those and other to catch up in The Literary World of Sylvia Hubbard. Want to talk about the book with the author? Join the FB Group Sylvia Hubbard’s Lit World 

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The Premium member link version will have questions and challenges, which I hope you all enjoy. But we did get the image from them. (Derek looks so handsome)

If you’d like to be an Alpha reader, tap me in the comments or DM me on my social media. Swag is promised for reader love and reviews. (You must get an account with storyoriginapp.com.)

If you are a Premium Member, you can start reading for FREE – no tokens necessary by going into your member section. Sign in to the main Member page by clicking here and then go to the link to start reading the chapters. I hope you answer the questions and do the challenges because the one that does the most gets the best swag!

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Here we go… on to the next chapter / or episode as they say in Kindle Vella land.

How’s your writing and reading journey going? Let me know in the comments.

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