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I know I’m waaaay late on this, but this is what had happened…
Right after I posted chapter 13, I get to writing. Then my little sister comes over and I’m explaining the story to her. She’s like, omg, this should be a movie.
I get out my book chart and start going through all my stories with her.
Yeah, we had a lot of time to talk and she was so enthused about everything, I literally started from the first story.
Dreams of Reality.
Now I say all this, because as I’m telling her this, in the back of my mind, it’s putting some dots together… A lot of dots together.
Dots that have to do with Dreams of Reality, Emperor’s Addiction/Heart and this story He Touched Me. Things I can start putting up now and then getting you later.
Yes, I’m talking about the twist to this story… or at least one of the twists.
Yeah, it’s going to go down..
(this is me working)
Yet, in order to facilitate this whole conundrum, I needed to put some characters in place. No, Taylor Bellini, who you’re about to meet isn’t one the characters. My
I’m re-evaluating my story and then decided, hey, why not do this… well, hubby #mademynight go into the fray and decided to take it up a notch. The plot immediately thickened and I just knew instead of coming up with a whole new book, I could just incorporate a lot of things I’ve already been wanting to put out in the universe.
I’m getting excited.
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He Touched Me – Chapter Fourteen
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So, for me this chapter with a little bit all over the place (felt like I was trapped in an ADHD moment). Staring out with a dream and the flow of events. The fact that Tyler didn’t ask if Magnum took the drink. The fact that there was no follow-up or rebuttal questions asked in regards to the two strangers. She seemed very calm at the mention of it. Based on other chapters she seems like she would have been frantic and panicking and ready to move or mention it to Tyler.🤷🏿♀️
It’s so many questions I have to ask. So many head-scratching moments and missed opportunities in this chapter. Did Zuri drink the drink unknowingly in the middle of the night? Did Magnum really come back in the middle of the night or was it Lucas or *wait a minute drum roll* was it someone else?I have more questions the strangers, the laptop, the threat(s) on her life, Taylor, Tyler, the formulas, 44(which I believe has something to do with her mother or *gasp* 🤐🤐🤐) ?
Either way this will make it a great filler chapter once you clean it up a little bit or maybe do a little restructuring.
*Again please note these are my opinion as a reader, but you have to write the book the way that works best for you.*
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okay, what’s the gasp – zipping the mouth close thingy? lol I was halfway sleep reading the comments initially (mentally drained) but now I’m up and drinking coffee.
And please never hold back on opinions. Gurl, if you go back and see the vicious comments they were dropping during Dark Facade, you’d be shock I continued the story or continued writing.
Also, please ask the question about Taylor and Tyler. I’m curious about that as well.
STORY SPOILER: 44 does not have to do with her mother.
And that’s all I have to say about that.
The 🤐🤐🤐 means I’m keeping my lips zipped. I do a lot of things for dramatic effects and other reader engagement. I’ll definitely ask my questions about Tyler and Taylor in the next chapter.
Ok I feel like this chapter is leading up to something big. I don’t think anyone wants to believe their mother is evil but Zuri better stop being so naive. I’m also wondering if Magnum is the father of her baby, that I don’t believe died at birth. There are so many twist and turns this story can take and I can’t wait.
Chapters 14 and 15 seem to be the same thing or am I missing something and I really hate it for missing something. You are by far my favorite Arthur I don’t care what media outlet you use for your book I’m buying a book just let me know when and where. I’ve already started a chart I’m so desperate for a notebook from you I started rereading all your other books and making it excel chart to link who’s who and what is what.