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Yes, the name was supposed to be Derrick McGhee. Thank you for catching that!
I love that you keep me on my toes.
I’ll do one more post by the end of the day, but i would love for you all to invite others to read the story. Thanks!!
enjoy…
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This story is currently in editing and publishing stages … For more information, please go to author’s website for update http://sylviahubbard.com A Little Bit of Sin Won’t Hurt (c) 2009 Sylvia Hubbard. All Rights Reserved.
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A Little Bit of Sin – Chapter 3.1
OKAY SYL, WHAT’S UP WITH THE YOUR GOING TO HELL!! HE SOUNDS A LITTLE OFF. Yes I believe in the Lord and know you are not suppose to have pre-marital sex, but putting all of that aside because I did not get a religous vibe from him what in the world is dude problem? My guess is it has something to with his childhood.
Wow, CB, you’re picking up things quite well.OMG!I think I’m becoming predictable!LOL
I so missed that part, Carmel B & Sylvia, although that 'you're going to hell' thing was kinda jarring for me. Especially after all that cussing he just did at the bar/pub. I just didn't know what to make of it until now. Thanks for the eye-opener, Carmel B!
I also missed that one but thanks for the eye opener Caramel.I do find it strange that he is going to partake in the same illicit activity that he was just telling his brother is dishonorable.He has me wondering what really went on in their childhood that makes the almost identical twins SO different.Keep it coming!
I was wondering same thing y’all was wondering about Colin and Bernard childhood. This story is good. Keep the chapters coming.
I pick up on the first chapter that something happen in their childhood because Colin went to jail. It’s like the good twin, bad twin. Bernard don’t care what he does and Colin do. I know it has something to do with Bernard’s escort business.