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Sin’s Iniquity – Chapter 52
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AUTHOR, MOTHER, SPEAKER, JOURNALIST, CONSULTANT & MORE! Divorced Mother of three, Detroiter, Sylvia Hubbard, is not only an award winning best selling author of over 28 books, but also founder of one of Michigan's largest interactive literary community, The Motown Writers Network/The Michigan Literary Network. View all posts by @SylviaHubbard1
The Story is now a real drag. Feels like you are not sure how to end it. 🙁
I personally liked this chapter. What would make it better would be for them to find Dwight still alive somewhere. I think he’ll resurface after the capture of Annelle’s boyfriend. At least that’s what I hope.
Okay, Sylvia, it’s time to bring Dwight back from the dead now. Maybe have him show up one late night after the baby is born. Sinclaire thinks its a burglar, but it’s Dwight. He walks with a limp or maybe one of his arms is paralyzed from the incident, but hey, she still loves him anyway.>>Just a few ideas, because I honestly don’t know how you’re going to end the story at this point.>>Suprina
LOL…why Dalton being mean to Sinclaire? He know he love her like a play cousin, lol.>>I know, I know…its in his nature…but really I thought his letter was cute and funny.