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About the book:
Derek seeks revenge on ex-friend Maddox Ryan for a deadly fire he thinks killed his fiance, Adira. He sabotages Maddox Ryan’s philanthropy firm but discovers his former friend’s innocence. As the sabotage continues, everyone outside of their throuple becomes prime suspects. It is a tale of betrayal, revenge, and the complex bonds of friendship with second chances.
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Chapter update: 06/16/2024
What happened in this chapter:(stop if you haven’t read it yet; spoilers might be mentioned)
Conflict and Relationships:
The chapter delves into the intense conflict between Adira and Redd over Derek. Redd challenges Adira’s role in Derek’s life, hinting at deep-seated family disapproval, a troubled romantic history, and the resurfacing of painful past memories. Adira resolutely stands her ground, defending her significance and refusing to yield. Redd’s recounting of past events and Derek’s emotional struggles adds layers of complexity to their relationships.
Plans for Tonight:
Adira later prepares for an intimate night planned by her husband, Maddox. The meticulous plans and the reference to their safe word, Lemon Balm, indicate a planned, calculated intimate experience. Adira is determined to embrace the night and solidify her relationship with Maddox and Derek.
Dinner Conversations:
Meanwhile, Maddox, during dinner, contemplates the complexities of family expectations and standards. He discusses familial obligations with a young woman, Ryleigh, and reveals the weight of their family’s historical legacy while planning for future actions.
Notes from Chapter summarization:
Overall, the chapter is rich in character interactions, highlighting conflicts, emotional struggles, and the elaborate plans that shape their interconnected lives.
AUTHOR’S NOTE:
I lost this chapter. I edited it over 2k words and then came back to it a day later and the word count was only 900 and something. I was about to die, but I found out how to go into the version history and pull up my document. I was about to cry. Seriously. Once I found everything, I think I added 500 more words which I know should matter since the terms of pricing changed on the various platforms (the flat fee charges) but I’m not here to gripe. Only to tell you that you got extra and I don’t mind. Enjoy
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COMPANIONSHIP AND SERIALS… RELATED TO THIS STORY
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Other companionship books
His Substitute Wife… Her Sister – Nevada (she appears in others, but this is where she starts)
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Answers to Frequent Questions
I’m working in LivingWriter.com on the story. I’m trying to move away from Google docs.
I like adding my author’s notes (keep track of what I say and offer more words without worrying about a word count like when I type it fresh in the Kindle Vella platform.
I’m also using storyoriginapp.com to keep up with my word count and offer beta copies behind a paywall for my premium and alpha readers. This is fun and exciting. Maybe I’ll offer it over on my site in a full book later. We’ll see how the turnout comes.
I’m using my blog to track my writer’s thoughts. I can’t share the deep ones in the Author’s Notes; only real writers can understand.
So I did use ChatGPT to help me outline after giving it a detailed synopsis (about a page long), but I’m finding myself moving a lot of things around at least having an outline to remember a lot of the things I’d have to come back and add.
It’s my first time using ChatGPT on a live book, and I hope this will help this paper write a lot faster so I can give my readers the chapters.
Moving things around meaning, a lot of the things ChatGPT told me to write in Chapters 3 and 4 I managed to manipulate in Chapter 1, and then in Chapter 4, I’m pulling from Chapters 5 and six, so I’m a little ahead of the game, but I’m still following The Save the Cat method in my telling of the story.
Having the outline makes me write more because I know where I’m going, and I can map out in my head better how to get to scenes faster and not be so wordy.
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My editing process.”
I use Grammarly, which works well in Livingwriter and then I’ll post it in my Kindle Vella, check the grammar some more, read it out loud, and then if I’m satisfied, I’ll post it.
Got questions? Ask away in the comments. I’m eager to share my journey and work out any confusion.
Don’t forget the companionship stories are Eve’s Deception (AVAILABLE FOR PRE-ORDER ON AMAZON) and Delilah’s Desire (IN THE KINDLE VELLA LIBRARY) / While you’re waiting for the next episodes, grab those and other to catch up in The Literary World of Sylvia Hubbard. Want to talk about the book with the author? Join the FB Group Sylvia Hubbard’s Lit World
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The Premium member link version will have questions and challenges, which I hope you all enjoy. But we did get the image from them. (Derek looks so handsome)
If you’d like to be an Alpha reader, tap me in the comments or DM me on my social media. Swag is promised for reader love and reviews. (You must get an account with storyoriginapp.com.)
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Here we go… on to the next chapter / or episode as they say in Kindle Vella land.
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