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About the book:
Derek seeks revenge on ex-friend Maddox Ryan for a deadly fire he thinks killed his fiance, Adira. He sabotages Maddox Ryanās philanthropy firm but discovers his former friendās innocence. As the sabotage continues, everyone outside of their throuple becomes prime suspects. It is a tale of betrayal, revenge, and the complex bonds of friendship with second chances.
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Chapter update: 10/25/2023
What happened in this chapter
Maddox has to face his wife and give her the terms Dag has set if they are to save their son.Ā
Alexis doesnāt trust Adra at the office.
We find out one of the reasons Maddox hates his father.Ā
Adira and Maddox discuss what happened and why she needs to sign the papers.
AUTHORāS NOTE:
If you want to know the software he was investigating, youāll have to read Delilahās Desire. Maddoxās calm isĀ facade if you must know. I do love how he really loves his wife, but he doesnāt say it enough. Yes, she can see his desire in action, but heās a different type of protagonist for me. Inverted and not verbally expressive. Yet, whether Adira and he know it or not, they do have a deep connection. As i write in Adiraās head, I feel a lot of fear for the future. Who do you think Adraās first love is and will this play out in the story?Ā
Where do you think the conversation is going to go between Maddox and Adira? And what do you think will happen once Derek knows Adira is truly alive.Ā
Jump in the comments, or join us in the FB group (Sylvia Hubbardās Lit World) and talk away.
Donāt forget to lmk: Are you #TeamDerek or #TeamMaddox?
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Writerās Notes: ā word count ā51,508
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COMPANIONSHIP AND SERIALSā¦ RELATED TO THIS STORY
And while youāre on Amazon, get the companionship book to Desireās Tryst, which is Delilahās Desire and Eveās Deception
Other companionship books
His Substitute Wifeā¦ Her Sister ā Nevada (she appears in others, but this is where she starts)
Continue following this post or read other updated posts to see this companionship books list grow (or read ALL my books so youāre already familiar with them when they pop in.)
Answers to Frequent Questions
Iām working in LivingWriter.com on the story. Iām trying to move away from Google docs.
I like adding my authorās notes (keep track of what I say and offer more words without worrying about a word count like when I type it fresh in the Kindle Vella platform.
Iām also using storyoriginapp.com to keep up with my word count and offer beta copies behind a paywall for my premium and alpha readers. This is fun and exciting. Maybe Iāll offer it over on my site in a full book later. Weāll see how the turnout comes.
Iām using my blog to track my writerās thoughts. I canāt share the deep ones in the Authorās Notes; only real writers can understand.
So I did use ChatGPT to help me outline after giving it a detailed synopsis (about a page long), but Iām finding myself moving a lot of things around at least having an outline to remember a lot of the things Iād have to come back and add.
Itās my first time using ChatGPT on a live book, and I hope this will help this paper write a lot faster so I can give my readers the chapters.
Moving things around meaning, a lot of the things ChatGPT told me to write in Chapters 3 and 4 I managed to manipulate in Chapter 1, and then in Chapter 4, Iām pulling from Chapters 5 and six, so Iām a little ahead of the game, but Iām still following The Save the Cat method in my telling of the story.
Having the outline makes me write more because I know where Iām going, and I can map out in my head better how to get to scenes faster and not be so wordy.
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My editing process.ā
I use Grammarly, which works well in Livingwriter and then Iāll post it in my Kindle Vella, check the grammar some more, read it out loud, and then if Iām satisfied, Iāll post it.
Got questions? Ask away in the comments. Iām eager to share my journey and work out any confusion.
Donāt forget the companionship stories are Eveās Deception (AVAILABLE FOR PRE-ORDER ON AMAZON) and Delilahās Desire (IN THE KINDLE VELLA LIBRARY) / While youāre waiting for the next episodes, grab those and other to catch up in The Literary World of Sylvia Hubbard. Want to talk about the book with the author? Join the FB Group Sylvia Hubbardās Lit WorldĀ
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The Premium member link version will have questions and challenges, which I hope you all enjoy. But we did get the image from them. (Derek looks so handsome)
If youād like to be an Alpha reader, tap me in the comments or DM me on my social media. Swag is promised for reader love and reviews. (You must get an account with storyoriginapp.com.)
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Here we goā¦ on to the next chapter / or episode as they say in Kindle Vella land.
Howās your writing and reading journey going? Let me know in the comments.
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