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About the book:

Derek seeks revenge on ex-friend Maddox Ryan for a deadly fire he thinks killed his fiance, Adira. He sabotages Maddox Ryan’s philanthropy firm but discovers his former friend’s innocence. As the sabotage continues, everyone outside of their throuple becomes prime suspects. It is a tale of betrayal, revenge, and the complex bonds of friendship with second chances.

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Chapter update: 10/14/2023|

AUTHOR’S NOTE: This chapter moved fast. I was just on top of everything. I did set up so much in advance.

(Reader question, From chapter 15) Who is Redd? She’s a street doctor. She’s appeared in several books, most recently in Delilah’s Desire, which is Dag’s book.

(Another reader’s question) Will a Heart or Black make an appearance? Most likely a Heart.

Now it’s my turn to ask a question:

  • What is Kathryn keeping a secret? That question bothered me when Adira was in the kitchen with her mother.
  • AND why does her father treat Adira like a stepchild? She’s prospering even more than her sister, but it’s like the better her life gets, the worse he treats her.

I’d love to hear your comments about this and what you think about her addiction. Or would you really call it an addiction or proxy to what she really wants? Jump in the comments, or join us over in the FB group (Sylvia Hubbard’s Lit World) and talk away.

I do apologize for taking so long to drop a chapter this week, but I got it in under the wire. Whew!

Listening to Debra Owsley this morning made me feel like I needed to get crap done, and I jumped right in my book once my second Saturday was over with for Motown Writers & Michigan Literary Network meetup.

I want to thank you guys for all your comments on the story, plus all the likes. Now I need to get my butt some FAVE so we can really rock this book.

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Writer’s Notes: – word count –35,589


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Don’t forget to lmk: Are you #TeamDerek or #TeamMaddox?

Answers to Frequent Questions

I’m working in LivingWriter.com on the story. I’m trying to move away from Google docs.

I like adding my author’s notes (keep track of what I say and offer more words without worrying about a word count like when I type it fresh in the Kindle Vella platform.

I’m also using storyoriginapp.com to keep up with my word count and offer beta copies behind a paywall for my premium and alpha readers. This is fun and exciting. Maybe I’ll offer it over on my site in a full book later. We’ll see how the turnout comes.

I’m using my blog to track my writer’s thoughts. I can’t share the deep ones in the Author’s Notes; only real writers can understand.

So I did use ChatGPT to help me outline after giving it a detailed synopsis (about a page long), but I’m finding myself moving a lot of things around at least having an outline to remember a lot of the things I’d have to come back and add.

It’s my first time using ChatGPT on a live book, and I hope this will help this paper write a lot faster so I can give my readers the chapters.

Moving things around meaning, a lot of the things ChatGPT told me to write in Chapters 3 and 4 I managed to manipulate in Chapter 1, and then in Chapter 4, I’m pulling from Chapters 5 and six, so I’m a little ahead of the game, but I’m still following The Save the Cat method in my telling of the story.

Having the outline makes me write more because I know where I’m going, and I can map out in my head better how to get to scenes faster and not be so wordy.

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My editing process.”

I use Grammarly, which works well in Livingwriter and then I’ll post it in my Kindle Vella, check the grammar some more, read it out loud, and then if I’m satisfied, I’ll post it.

Got questions? Ask away in the comments. I’m eager to share my journey and work out any confusion.

Don’t forget the companionship stories are Eve’s Deception (AVAILABLE FOR PRE-ORDER ON AMAZON) and Delilah’s Desire (IN THE KINDLE VELLA LIBRARY) / While you’re waiting for the next episodes, grab those and other to catch up in The Literary World of Sylvia Hubbard. Want to talk about the book with the author? Join the FB Group Sylvia Hubbard’s Lit World 

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The Premium member link version will have questions and challenges, which I hope you all enjoy. But we did get the image from them. (Derek looks so handsome)

If you’d like to be an Alpha reader, tap me in the comments or DM me on my social media. Swag is promised for reader love and reviews. (You must get an account with storyoriginapp.com.)

If you are a Premium Member, you can start reading for FREE – no tokens necessary by going into your member section. Sign in to the main Member page by clicking here and then go to the link to start reading the chapters. I hope you answer the questions and do the challenges because the one that does the most gets the best swag!

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And while you’re on Amazon, get the companionship book to Desire’s Tryst, which is Delilah’s Desire and Eve’s Deception

Other companionship books

His Substitute Wife… Her Sister – Nevada (she appears in others, but this is where she starts)

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Here we go… on to the next chapter / or episode as they say in Kindle Vella land.

How’s your writing and reading journey going? Let me know in the comments.

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