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Part 12 started out is a little over 4000 words and then I did corrections through Grammarly. The word count dropped to near 3400.
Lesson on writing from this chapter: I’m still a bit wordy. Although I still ignored several passive sentence structures so sue me. There is possible one or two dangling modifiers as well.
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I’m still looking for a new title, although I’m loving the suggestions coming in.
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Enjoy…
His African Sweetheart
Part 12
By Sylvia Hubbard
Part 12
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