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His African Sweetheart – Part 12

Author’s Note:

Part 12 started out is a little over 4000 words and then I did corrections through Grammarly.  The word count dropped to near 3400.

Lesson on writing from this chapter: I’m still a bit wordy. Although I still ignored several passive sentence structures so sue me. There is possible one or two dangling modifiers as well.


This text scores better than 99% of all text checked by Grammarly where comparable goals were set.


Word Count

Characters 18,146
Words 3,359
Sentences 233
Reading time 13 min 26 sec
Speaking time 25 min 50 sec


Metrics compared to other Grammarly users

Word length 4.2
Sentence length 14.4
Readability score 80
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His African Sweetheart

Part 12

By Sylvia Hubbard

Part 12

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