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Author’s Note:
I just did another video of my writing experience for Black’s Innocence. Subscribe to my youtube if you haven’t already and then don’t forget to share as well.
In the video, I speak about writing live and interacting with my Alpha Readers (you guys, the official sneak readers) and I talk about how I started writing live.
I blame all my success on you guys, my sneak readers because you guys are the ones that have kept me going since 2007 when I started on Mistaken Identity.
The journey has been long, but I’ve managed to really keep up and find great stories to give to my readers.
I really love and appreciate you guys and I thank you for taking this journey with Black’s Innocence.
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Now my comments about the story:
Three chapters for a love scene does seem excessive, but the rest of the story is actually based from these chapters. I needed to establish Tyler and Lauren’s relationship. I needed to solidify where they were so I have a way to navigate the hot mess headed their way.
You really gotta know where your characters are in their heads and hearts to understand how to move them in the direction of the story.
I don’t even say in the direction I want them to go because if I was Lauren, I wouldn’t even know how to handle what is coming, but it’s nice knowing how strong she is and that I know she can take what is coming her way.
I do ask my alpha readers as I am setting up the beginning to the end, what storylines haven’t I addressed or need to address?
… Enjoy
Black’s Innocence Chapter 32
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There is no way he is pretending, I believe he is in love with her and it will be hard for him to pretend he’s not especially if/when Dylan come back and all of a sudden investigate what happened (something he should have done a long time ago) but anyway that’s my thoughts 🙂
I had no problem with the back to back sex chapters. Usually I hate to read long and drawn out sex scenes but this was great.
That is Tyler’s way of telling Lauren how much he cares. He still has an agenda and falling for Lauren wasn’t part of it. I can’t wait to find out how he will act when Dylan return.
That stupid bastard of an ex husband is back. Tyler is giving her freedom to choose.
Yes what the hell just happened? Is Tyler falling for Lauren? I mean for such a hard ass and how cruel he was previously he sure is being Awfully nice which is not like Tyler unless he has something up his sleeve. His starting to sound like those Blacks for real.
The sex chappies work wonders for my imagination because you take your time. Now as for Tyler, something big and bad is about to happen to him or around him. It’s like he is preparing to parts ways with her in a way. He preparing her for just in case problems. That dang Dylan is going to be fired up when he returns. Is the old co-worker the one filling Dylan’s bed? Who did he really want to take or is it Deborah? Baby mama perhaps? Dammit Gina come thru with these answers.