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Author’s Note:
The last chapter was the highest read chapter other than the initial chapters. Wow and wow! You guys really went to town on that one and we haven’t really gotten to the good parts.
Funny how a story comes to you when you least expect it and then you’re like oh my goodness that is a good story and then you come up with the twist and you’re like oh my goodness this is gonna be the best story AND THEN you find a way to inject another awesome storyline underneath the extra most bestest* storyline ever and you’re like OH MY LAWDT! I GOTTA GO CHANGE MY UNDERWEAR!
Yeah, that’s where I am.
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(See below for more author’s notes & *yes, I did take that from Little Caesars)
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Now my comments about the story:
So you think you know what’s going on, huh? For those of you that don’t or didn’t read the comments from Chapter 16, then you don’t know what we’re talking about.
Let’s start with first, I will confess The Shadow is in town. If you’re trying to figure out the timeline this is after she’s been kidnapped which only means she’s working for the person we shall not name.
If you’re a Shadow fan then you know, like one reader said, Shadow doesn’t like to do anything unless it’s helping herself so although she is working for someone else, she is trying her best to get out of her situation and be left alone.
So it gets complicated from here because if I say anymore then you’ll just know what’s going on and no I won’t answer the question on whether she’s there for Dylan or Tyler. You’ll have to figure that out for yourself but in about five chapters you’ll pretty much guesstimate what’s really going on.
And it doesn’t look good for Lauren
Enjoy…
Chapter 17
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You are the “extra most bestest” to quote Little Caesars too. You got my blood pressure up. I’m running around in circles trying to figure out your twists.
And what do you think my twists are? I love to hear what you are thinking … #Toocurious
Dammit Tyler… Dammit Lauren… He is a sweet meanie. I wonder did Dylan convince Tyler’s ex that it was best to be with the same race and seduce her with his lil weenie. Or was she a money grubbing whore out for the next best thing, looking for the come up? You got me stumped. His wife couldn’t be the Costello chick so who is she and what does Shadow want? What’s up with the old co-worker? Dammit… So much to figure out. 😢👀🙈🙊🙉
I like that sweet meanie. LOL.
You guys made me go back and question the storyline, but then I see how you came up with your deductions.
Story spoiler yes, Tyler’s wife became a money grubbing whore, but her mistake was that she got greedy and thought the grass was greener on the other side.
His wife is not the Costello chick, which I can understand why you would think it was Sharlie.
thank you for keeping me on my toes.
Good lawd, my toes are getting tired.
xoxo